This is the second draft of our music video. Here we are very near completion, we have made changes to the title, and gone with a fully animated sequence that will then dissolve
into our live-action video. We have also chosen a more conventional western font. To finalise the video we just need to colour correct the videos.

Draft 02 Feedback:

Here we received feedback from two university students studying media, who had also created their own high grade music videos in the past. The feedback we received was positive and we were glad to hear that they clearly understood our narrative even though it was non-linear. One thing they did point out as an improvement was to colour correct our shots of the narrative, as we had used artificial lens flares which they didnt see plausible due to the rainy climate we filmed in. So we will aim to colour correct and create a warmer feel to the shots to make the lens flares more realistic.