A New Improved Feature Article

My new draft –

What I changed –

  1. Structure ( added paragraphs )
  2. Changed important or attention grabbing words into bold
  3. Added more detail

What I want to add –

  • More inside information in detail + be specific
  • set more of a place and detail
  • Explain why to some thing such as why island life may give a different perspective

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