Draft of The Double Page Spread

Here is my first draft of my double page spread. When the photo is in presentation it is clear to see.

My feedback –

• Flip gradient but likes the idea
• Likes big photo
• Add some fun fonts
• Add graphic illustrations

My Targets –

• Add in what I actually want masthead to be and standfirst
• switch gradient
• try find a fun layout something unique
• Add a drop capital
• Byline
• Unstretch photo