Complete Magazine Draft
Feedback –
- House style coming across
- Nice plug and logo
- Not keen on black and white checkered board effect
- Seems colour scheme is very basic
- Nice inserts on contents page
- Main cover line in block capitals + extra information in lower case
- Group photo seems squashed
- Like the extra box
- Not sure on photo of Alice in different outfit
- Photos seem a bit squished
- Nice how text is wrapped around image
- Photography by bit is too big
- Watch for spelling mistakes
Targets –
- Cover lines need to be more music based
- Add another colour (yellow?)
- Align numbers on contents page
- Make number bigger and bolder
- Get creative with main cover line and extra info
- Have more extra boxes and add more colour in
- Look at proportions on DPS picture
- Make sure page number correspond with contents page number
- Add standfirst on DPS
- Need a byline