Complete Magazine Draft

Feedback –

• House style coming across
• Nice plug and logo
• Not keen on black and white checkered board effect
• Seems colour scheme is very basic
• Nice inserts on contents page
• Main cover line in block capitals + extra information in lower case
• Group photo seems squashed
• Like the extra box
• Not sure on photo of Alice in different outfit
• Photos seem a bit squished
• Nice how text is wrapped around image
• Photography by bit is too big
• Watch for spelling mistakes

Targets –

• Cover lines need to be more music based
• Add another colour (yellow?)
• Align numbers on contents page
• Make number bigger and bolder
• Get creative with main cover line and extra info
• Have more extra boxes and add more colour in
• Look at proportions on DPS picture
• Make sure page number correspond with contents page number
• Add standfirst on DPS
• Need a byline