Pitch + Feedback
POSITIVES:
- Decided to do it in an industrial setting to reflect society
- We decided on outfits and colour scheme
- Decided Alice will be in performance and narrative but will be cautious that she needs to film as well
- Got a good narrative idea which can send a message to the audience
- We have decided what days are best and are willing to put in a our time
NEGATIVES:
- Need to be cautious to include Alice for filming
- Identify more places to film so we can achieve more varied for the setting
- The ending needs to be clear of what we are trying to portray
- We need to borrow a camera as neither of us have one