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  • Decided to do it in an industrial setting to reflect society
  • We decided on outfits and colour scheme
  • Decided Alice will be in performance and narrative but will be cautious that she needs to film as well
  • Got a good narrative idea which can send a message to the audience
  • We have decided what days are best and are willing to put in a our time


  • Need to be cautious to include Alice for filming
  • Identify more places to film so we can achieve more varied for the setting
  • The ending needs to be clear of what we are trying to portray
  • We need to borrow a camera as neither of us have one

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