This is my third draft for my thriller film. This includes non-diegetic, diegetic sounds and foley sounds recorded by Harry and I.

The video below is some feedback I received on my sound and music.

Based on this feedback these are a few of my targets:

• Colour correction with a filter, I will most likely add a tint to make it darker.
• Fade music before title and overlay a different piece of instrumentation.
• More diegetic sounds i.e. clinking of bottles and goblets.
• Change in sound when the gun is revealed.
• Add sea gulls as apart of the dietetic ambient sound.