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For this second draft of our music video, we have added in the clips from a recent shoot we did where our female model is in a therapy session. It is understood by the group that we have a lot of footage to cover, in order to create a full music video to the best of our ability. The variety of angles we used has improved dramatically and made the clips much more personal, which was important to notice especially with the nature of these clips being in a ‘therapy session’.
Despite us being proud of the work we have produced in this short timeframe, there is room for improvements, especially when it comes to the performance clips and the story part of our narrative. In our next draft we hope to improve this, our next shoot will enable us to do so. During this shoot we aim to be more organized and have a story board already planned out.
After analyzing this previous students work, we have come to realize that we need to use more interesting camera angles, especially when it comes to the performance clips, as it creates a more up beat and interesting aspect to the video, which ours currently lacks. The video could also include camera transitions that will move from one clip to another, this will be visually pleasing and allow the clips to flow easier. Utilizing how we edit our clips to suit the narrative will make it easier for the audience to understand the storyline.