What’s new?
For my 2nd draft, I have added a quote from my artist over the main image, this is conventional to a magazine so therefore thought it was needed. I have also added paragraphs within the article and have made the spacing overall better. The image that was stretched on the bottom right has now been changed in shape with a now new border that fits with the colour scheme.
What’s next?
- watch the guttering space between the standfirst and the background box i.e. very near the edge at times
- look at the box with the information at the bottom….re configurate the copy inside and change the font – make more of it?
- no need to say, journalist of ….just say Waved Magazine and include the logo here?
- the door lock is a bit obvious…can we photoshop it out ?
- make the drop capital bigger, bolder