Below you will be able to see our third draft of our Music Video ‘Charlemagne’ by the Blossoms.

Whats Changed?

  • One of the main thing that has changed throughout the video would be the use of effects. We have added a large variety of effects in order for us to help portray our narrative meaning better.
  • As well as this we have added some new, different clips into the video to add a bit more context meaning it’s not as confusing.

Below you will be able to see 5 comments from audience and peers about the music video, and what they think we could do to improve.

My targets for improvement would be;

  • One thing that we would try tom improve would be editing on the beat. This would be to ensure that the video doesn’t cut on random parts of the song making it seem choppy throughout.
  • Another target would be to ensure that we include more fishbowl throughout the narrative section of the video. This would be to show the direct contrast between the castle’s entrapment and the entrapment of the fishbowl.
  • Another target would be to ensure that the narrative is obvious and has a meaning, for example not just putting random clips in because they look cool.