What went well:

• Masthead is good
• Good star image
• Effective leopard background on the front cover
• Well-known 50’s artists, easily recognized
• Catchy cover lines nice image and columns
• Good idea to use fruity background in double page spread
•  Quotes work well on double page spreads

Targets

Front cover:

• Masthead needs to have more of a 50’s vibe, maybe add a block colour behind it
• “Facts” could be removed and just keep the word “exclusive
• Change the names of artists on the front to shorter names for clarity
• Another colour to be added to keep it interesting

 Contents page:

• Use tutti frutti font on the contents page so that it carries on the theme from the front cover
• Make headlines and layout more interesting by using block colours
• Center cover lines to add energy, use upper and lower case letters
• Crop images to just Adelaide and more rock and roll imagery to be embedded
• Images of old fashioned things like guitars

Double page spread:

• Fix the quote line spacing
• Make dress fabric image in the background smaller, use the cherry as a logo for tutti frutti on front cover
• Make image of her bigger or crop it
•  Make headline bigger, make sure it doesn’t go across the fold
• Change the layout of the images

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