Above my my new and improved pages of my magazine.

Targets to improve:

Front cover:

• Add some dimension with a drop shadow to the yellow box behind the masthead
• Check the line spacing
• Add in more names along the bottom and on the left side
• Change the “frutti” part of the mast head to the colours used on the contents page

Contents:

• Separate the columns and images with boarders
• Give a page number for the double page spread
• Put another plug in near the top of the page
• Make the headlines upper case and extra information lower case

Double page spread

• Make background smaller to show off more of the design
• Make title bigger
• Add boarders to photos to make them stand out
• Move the caption of the main cover star to make it clearer