June
18
Pitch + Feedback
FEEDBACK:
Positive areas:
- Decided to do it in an industrial setting to reflect society
- We decided on outfits and colour scheme
- Decided Alice will be in performance and narrative but will be cautious that she needs to film as well
- Got a good narrative idea which can send a message to the audience
- We have found out what days work best for us so that we can meet to film
What to work on:
- The ending needs to be clear of what we are trying to portray
- Identify more places to film so that there can be more varied settings in the narrative
- We need to think of ways that I can do some filming
- We need to borrow a camera