Here is draft 2 of our music video, below is some positive and negative feedback that we gave ourselves when watching the clip a few times. We noticed some things we need to change and some things that went well.

Reflection –

• We need more footage – performing footage, nature clips, and lots more narrative, as from putting it together we feel as if we don’t have enough to convey the story and we keep reusing old footage which lessens the quality of the video.
• We need to get more various angles like high and low so we can convey her emotion clearly and show her feeling happy versus sad.
• When we go to edit we need to play with the clips editing-wise and add colour, different effects and transitions, and lighting changes to add contrast between clips.
• We also noticed that a black border was very obvious around some of the footage that we took on our phones so we have to rescale it.

-What went well: 

• Close-ups were nice and showed a connection from the performer to the audience, and her emotion
• Nature clips helped display narrative, we picked some relevant places such as the graffiti area around the bowling alley.