Critical Reflection Essay

How do your products represent social groups or issues?

Our star is portrayed as playful and anarchic, with the inclusion of his metanarrative representing him as arrogant and independent. He constitutes some extraordinary components to Dyer’s paradox of the star theory. Although absent in some areas, he is someone his audience aspires to be like. Despite this, his consistent presence in the music industry, reflects  more on the ordinary aspects of Dyer’s theory – portraying himself as approachable and available on social media, like the ‘boy next door’. The language that I used is direct, and the typeface is large and unique. The direct dialogue suggests that he is in control and authoritative, the bold, unique typeface allows him as an artist to pervade other artists in the industry. The contrast between the typeface and the images included in the DP suggest his anarchic tendencies and his variation between extraordinary and ordinary.

On the front cover of our DP, I wanted to represent our star as decadent, yet keep designs as conventional for an indie rock artist – the MES on the front cover represents this. The opulent leather jacket portrays him as someone of class and status, highlighting his confident and arrogant representation.

With the addition of the goblets, candles and jewels, the audience can freely understand that he is an upper class, almost authoritative artist. I photographed him in dim light, in regards to the narrative codes, a stern facial expression that held a semic code of suggesting his authoritative nature. In relation to Barthes signifier theory, the colour red in correlation with the red wine pouring outside the goblet rather than in it on the back of our DP, could be signifying a symbolic code for someone special, representing him as outstanding and sentimental – his ordinary side. It also signifies the unique ways in which he stands out from other artists in the industry – his extraordinary side. It holds a sense of arrogance about the artist, as well as the transformation of the image onto its side. It connotes a sense of playfulness to his rebellious fans.

How do your products engage with the audience?

My audience are typically hold a middle class socio-economic group, and are mostly men. Usually they are introverted, intellectual, and creative. They also tend to be less hardworking and less gentle. Passivity, anxiousness, and low self-esteem are other common personality characteristics. They like to live a lifestyle that follows social trends which are considered to consciously deviate from the mainstream. I needed to bare this in mind and develop my products off this so that I attract the correct target audience.

As the Blumer and Katz theory describes, it is necessary that in order for audiences to be engaged with media forms, they must include; significant social interaction, entertain the audience, inform the audience for engagement, and provoke a sense of personal identity. The SMP contains all of the above – it allows the audience and fans to decode texts and adopt a preferred reading. If the repertoire of elements is interchangeable, the audience will reject the text due to lack of engagement and understanding.

I ensured that the SMP included the essentials for engaging and maximizing audiences. An example of social interaction are the highlights. I included polls where followers could vote and make them feel part of what our artist is interested in. To develop the audience’s personal identity, a hashtag encouraged fans to utilize and join in with one another. B&K suggest that this creates a sense of togetherness, allowing fans to connect with one another, sharing their values. Additionally, I created a post about a charity the star supports – this encourages and reinforces the personal identities of the fans who are likely to look to the artist for guidance. Another  aspect of B&K’s model is that the SMP contains relevant information and entertainment. I created teasers, tour posters and competitions, to maximize the artists fanbase and generate a higher reach. To encourage preferred reading, the SMP has numerous posts and videos with captions developed to entice the audience and keep them entertained and engaged.

How did your research inform your products and the way they use or challenge conventions?

I researched numerous professional indie rock music videos, videos of this genre use roughly a 90:10 linear narrative performance ratio. It  seems to be conventional to have an overlying colour correction filter over the entirety of the video. It’s conventional for the videos to have a personal issue nearing the middle, that doesn’t resolve by the end. I watched an MV by Sam Fender, and it was evident that the typical MES featured; the characters wearing ordinary clothing – often simple, low-key lighting, and little-to-no accessories. Therefore, the generic shot conventions include reaction shots and mid shots to connect more with the audience. Lacey would refer to these as the repertoire of elements – what the audience expects to see when watching an indie rock music video.

During production I decided to both subvert and follow the generic conventions of indie rock videos. In regards to the content of our music video, a coloured filter on the whole thing would have disrupted the narrative sense. The audience would not expect this, as in reference to Altman, it is not part of the blueprint. The narrative included binary opposites of love and hate, and entrapment and freedom – causing a personal confrontation that did not resolve itself, forcing the characters into spirals of wistfulness and disbelief. Their relationship was much more symbolic and abstract compared to the indie rock conventions, so challenged this greatly. Despite this, the close up, reaction and mid shots within the narrative helped to communicate to the audience that the artist is someone who strives to connect with his fanbase and is eager to express that he’s ordinary and can relate to others – generating a sense of authenticity from our artist, which is a generic convention of indie rock.

 

How do the elements of your production work together to create a sense of ‘branding’?

Mission statement: ‘Lukash isn’t your average boy next door, he cares for controversial issues that most other artists feel are taboo. He is propelling himself towards legendary status, and pushing the indie rock norms to the next level, and intends to continue exploring new musical terrain. His albums are bold, brilliant and hold a comprehensive creative vision.’ This mission statement helped me when developing my knowledge and portrayal of my star image, and what the audience would expect via the blueprints of indie rock stars.

The brand of a star needs to be easily recognizable to a target audience. As a producer, I needed to communicate to my audience across numerous platforms using various forms of media language – otherwise the image, genre and narrative would not be conveyed successfully. Branding also means that you need a deepened comprehension of the star image. Our mission statement includes descriptions such as; ‘exploring new musical terrain’ which suggests he is on the independent music scene, and ‘bold, brilliant, holding a comprehensive creative vision’. Each product in this package synergizes with each other in order to represent the artist, genre and therefore the brand in different ways – portraying the artist as more than just what his SMP represents him as for example. Hall would suggest that demographics of the star’s audience are taken into consideration when creating the brand so the audience can decode his image to encourage a preferred reading. To ensure this I have followed many of the conventions of indie rock – this will develop the audience’s sense of personal identity.

Audiences and producers do not exist without each other so it’s crucial for me to create a package that engages the audience, and Dyer would recommend that a star image is constructed as both extraordinary and ordinary. The audience would expect to see a star with an anarchic, arrogant, opulent nature. This contrasts with Lacey’s theory, as the music video included a girl and boy that endured a personal issue. This aims to engage the audience in a new, unique way. However, the conventional close ups and upbeat rhythms, follows conventions and therefore promotes the typical indie rock branding. The DP resembles the arrogant nature of the star that is seen in the MV through his stern facial expression on the front cover. Meanwhile, in the SMP, I have worked to convey the same star image that’s represented throughout the DP and MV. The blunt, simplistic language along with the strict colour scheme emphasizes his control and opulence. Furthermore, the semic codes included in the MV and DP connote a sense of playfulness and cheekiness which can appeal to the demographics of the target audience. The mission statement aided me in creating the overall brand, as I was able to represent the package with a conventional metanarrative, a recognizable indie rock colour palette, and symbolic codes that create that of an anarchic yet free star image for the artist. 

Social Media Page 2

Our teacher sent us an MP3 link to an analysis of our SMP. With this feedback we are able to decode this information and translate it into what we have done well and what improvements need to be made in order to create a highly successful SMP for our indie rock star image.

(Usually this would be completed as a screencastify however, due to technical issues this was not possible)

Feedback from teacher

  • Aesthetically pleasing
  • Nearly nine posts
  • Noticeable that there is no release of the album or MV
  • More posts of the star himself once received images from him
  • Good performance posts – important so that the fans know that they can see Lukash
  • Charity post – excellent for promoting the stars ideologies and beliefs – encouraging personal identity
  • Teasers – build tension and create engagement
  • Live performance posts – show people that they can see him and make him present in their lives
  • Promotion of a tour – important as it is where Lukash will make most of his money and sell merchandise
  • Good radio interview post – cross media convergence
  • Spotify included – call to action
  • Trailer – fantastic
  • Synergy missing with another company or brand – offering promotions?
  • Lots of good stories / highlights
  • Getting audience involved on polls
  • Clever Sunday roast story that links to album once released
  • Put album in
  • MV release
  • Good politics, charity, supporting values and beliefs

Targets for improvement

  • We must add more posts, especially those regarding:
    • The release of the MV
    • Release of the album
    • Synergy which could possibly encourage promotions and offers
  • Add in some performance clips on the stories for highlights?
  • Make some GIFs or moving graphics to add to the feed to reinforce engagement and interest for our consumers

Social Media Page 1

Below is a screenshot of our SMP for our artist. We have completed 8 posts so far and we are planning on developing this much further to develop his star image and engagement with his audience.

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We have included all the conventions of an indie rock Instagram page such as; short, simplistic sentences that inform the audience and allow them to engage with the audience, as well as a basic colour scheme such as black and white. We aimed to portray him as extraordinary in the ways he performs and promotes his work, yet ordinary – this ordinary aspect of Dyer’s theory enables him to connect with his fans and develops his and his audiences personal identity.

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Targets for improvement

  • Create some form of merchandise to allow the audience to interact with our star more and promote his brand
  • Integrate more of the conventions from our music video and digipak to bring each of them together as a package rather than individual components
  • Make posts/highlights promoting physical copies of the album
  • Promote more collaborations – either with other artists/bands or other brands eg.crocs – another form of integrated advertising – cross media convergence to further engage
  • Try to link in more political issues to educate and inform the audience about relevant things that are happening in the world – this will also encourage more understanding of our stars values

Digipak Draft 3

Below is our draft 3 of our digipak. We have printed it out and inserted it into a plastic album case which gives us more of an indication as to what it would look like if it were a real, published DP, and how our consumers would view it.

Peer feedback:

We got our media classes to look at our digipak and decide from various music genres, which they think our DP most resembles. From this we are able to establish whether we have achieved the conventions of our music genre, or whether we have strayed and influenced our peers to think its a different genre to indie rock.

Indie pop – //// (4)

Pop – ////////// (10)

Hip-hop melodic/emotional rap – ////// (6)

Indie rock – ///// (5)

Rock – (0)

Folk – / (1)

Alternative rock – (0)

From this peer feedback it is evident that some changes need to be made so that it is more obvious as to what genre our DP is. We believe that the DP has little-to-no conventions of a pop album so are unsure why this has been the most popular choice. However, I can understand why peers may have chosen the hip-hop melodic/emotional rap. The opulent mise en scene that we have included may steer people to think its an upper class rapper playing with their wealth and creating unique scenes. It is clear that we have not made the DP clear for our consumers in regards to our audiences demographics as indie rock was the third lowest genre opinion.

Digipak Draft 2

Below is the 4 panels of our Digipak draft 2 album. We have considered the various technical conventions such as; the colour palette, typeface and conventional composition and framing associated with the indie rock genre.

We have completed our draft 2 for our digipak and below is a Screencastify from our teacher consisting of feedback for our next draft.

Targets for improvement – Screencastify

  • Include more of the table on the front cover image  –  have the candles at the top
  • ‘Sunday Roast all the trimmings’ as a track on the back cover 
  • Make the red on the back more distinctive – make it more blood coloured
  • Reposition inside right so that there is more of the chicken visible
  • Sharpen the trinkets on the table 
  • Straighten the left candle on the front cover
  • Add a shine to the goblet 

Digipak Draft 1

Below I have inserted the front and back cover of what we have completed for our digipak draft 1. I have additionally self assessed this work against the assessment criteria – helping me to understand whether our DP star image included the correct conventional and technical elements. From this I can then see if what improvements need to be made for draft 2.

Below I have self assessed our digipak draft 2 and this close analysis will significantly help me and our group when it comes to completing the draft 3.

Targets for improvement:

  • Change the typeface/positioning of the artists name on the front cover so that it is more easily recognisable and clearer for the audience to read
  • Straighten the left candle on the front cover so that it does not disrupt the cover by drawing attention to it rather than the star themselves
  • Play around with the colour layers on the front so that it has more correlation to the back cover – making it more of a ‘package’ DP rather than two individual items
  • Placement/colour of the album name? May need to be readjusted
  • Add in some deep reds to the front cover so that it matches the back cover
  • Create more line-spacing between the tracks on the back cover so that it is easier for the audience to read

Contact Sheet

Below are the contact sheets that I have created from the images that we took for our digipak. We carried out two shoots – one for the front cover, and inside right and left that we took at Aimee’s house, and one for the back cover that we shot in the white studio at school.

These two shoots that can be seen above were very successful and we had numerous shots to choose from that we thought fitted the conventions of our genre and star image. Some of the shots in both shoots have got a very low exposure, so these are our anomalies and we are not planning on using them in our album.

Shoot one was specifically for the front cover of the album however we were able to utilise this shoot for both the inside left and inside right also. This shoot was successful because we were very organised and worked together to ensure that the positioning and framing of each prop was accurate. Our model was also cooperative so this made sure that we could communicate the correct mise en scene and ‘vibe’ to our audience through his body language and facial expressions. As seen in the images, we tried to make the roast chicken the focus of the shoot – alongside our artist – as it has a direct reference to the title of our album. The lighting for this shoot was already brilliant for what we wanted to achieve however we may need to use some photo manipulation techniques in order to make the colour palette even more conventional to our genre.

Our second shoot was purely for the back cover of our album. This was another successful shoot as it mainly consisted of props and we were fully prepared with these. We tried hard to get the correct lighting, so much so that the ‘wine’ was the focus of the photographs, but again photo manipulation will have to be used so that it matches the same colour palette as the front cover. Additionally, it was necessary to set the shutter speed on the camera to much faster than usual so that we could capture the ‘wine’ while it was in full flow. This is important for our album as it heightens the quality of our overall product massively.

Timeline and Marketing Ideas

We have thought of 4 ideas that we could use to engage with our audience and promote the release of our album. They consist of a campaign, a competition, an Instagram filter and a TikTok sound. They are listed with details below:

Campaign – inspired by Faithless’ campaign

  • This campaign is designed to encourage the audience to post images of their Sunday roasts with the hashtag ‘#sundayroast’
  • With the strong correlation with our album cover being a roast dinner, it will allow consumers to recognise the hashtag and associate it with Lukash’s album
  • The benefits of hashtags are significant in creating a wider fanbase for our star such as; an increase in audience engagement, attract followers to a certain niche, strengthen brand/star image to help reach that target audience

Competition – inspired by Phoebe Bridgers campaign 

  • This competition will utilise the booklet in the cover of the album
  • Lukash will sign the inside of 12 of the booklets and the idea is that if someone purchases a signed album, they receive a prize – such as; a ticket for front row at a concert or a private concert
  • A competition like this will encourage our target audience to buy the product and will create excitement and engagement with our star and consumers 

Instagram filter – inspired by Phoebe Bridgers campaign

  • The idea of this campaign is to work with Spotify to create an Instagram filter to go alongside a song release
  • As well as promoting our star and his genre, this is an example of cross media convergence – which attracts a mass audience in itself
  • Lukash would repost these filters when a fan uses it, reminding the audience that the star does interact with his fans

TikTok sound – inspired by Clean Bandit’s campaign

  • This form of cross media convergence is something that could easily promote our stars music very quickly as there is a wide audience that use TikTok sounds frequently – encouraging engagement with our star
  • TikTok sounds are a very effective way to get music to a wider audience and due to the fact the sound will play over a personally created video, it means that the audience can adapt the sound to however they want to portray it – allowing it to be unique to not only the star but the consumers too

After completing research on campaigns, we have then created a timeline of what we think would be beneficial and effective to post on our SMP:

We have decided to plan for 9 Instagram posts for our SMP. We have started our posts with some lyrics from one of our artists songs. This will entice the audience and make them excited for when the song is eventually released. From then on we will continue to post things such as behind the scenes, tours, the album cover, interviews and of course the final release. However, along with that we are including a post regarding the charity that our artist is supporting – this will make him come across to the audience as different him from his extraordinary stardom and allow him to connect on a more intimate level with his fans. Another thing that we have chosen to include is a campaign and a competition. This is designed to draw the audience in and enable our star to engage with the audience more thoroughly, as well as have the audience get excited and interested in what our star is releasing – generating more attention towards his product and the music he produces. We may also have additional posts that we have not written as a part of our timeline (as this is just a guide), such as; advertisements for merchandise. This form of integrated advertising will promote the star to an extent where people will recognise him and his brand more frequently – widening his audience.

Audience Interaction with a SMP – an analysis

We have conducted a screencastify for the Arctic Monkeys social media page on Instagram. We have analysed how we believe the audience interacts and engages with them and their star image. It has references to the technical conventions, AIDA, Bulmer and Katz’s model, integrated advertising and Dyer’s paradox of the star theory. By doing this we are able to identify what a successful indie rock artists SMP looks like and how their conventions attract consumers.

Please click on the box in the top right to view screencastify.

Social Media Page Terminology

 Below I have annotated a social media page (Facebook) for the band Oasis in regards to what makes platforms like these allow artists to connect and engage with their audience. It is important to understand the various technical conventions that make social media platform so effective. Aspects such as bios, captions and posts – as well as marketing campaigns – are created in order to promote the artists music, and make their target audience aware of their presence in the music industry.