Feedback on Article


Now that my double page spread is almost finished, I got some peer feedback so that I had some outside opinions on how I can improve and make my double page spread better.


After receiving some verbal feedback from a peer, I have been told that I should try and fix the area in the top right corner where the text is difficult to read because the background is quite dark. Also a running target is to make the photoshop cleaner and less harsh.

I was also told that the article type was good because it felt very conversational, which suggests that the artists are speaking directly to the audience and not to a journalist.

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