This is some peer feedback that we received for our final draft on how it could have been improved.
Our targets for improvement are:
- Should include faster pace editing and cutting when the song is more built up to create a more powerful effect
- Could have used more close ups on the singer to focus on emotions to add meaning to the lyrics and connect with the audience
- A wider variety of shots such as; pan shot, tracking shot, extreme close-up would have also been useful