Draft 1 – Feedback

We asked our teacher to watch music video so far and give us some feedback on how we could improve it. Below you can watch the feedback.

The main targets include:
  • In the performance shots we could add some movement within the frame, the static camera doesn’t give it quite enough energy. We could do this within post production quite easily, just adding a slight dolly-look effect.
  • In the shots which overlap each other, we could feather the edges of the shots, they seem a bit too harsh.
  • Colour correction within the narrative, to give it a warmer look, would look good.
Our own additional targets include:
  • Perhaps re-film the females performance to get more enthusiastic, realistic shots. We also think if we do re-film this then we should change what our performer wears, perhaps a white shirt and have her hair down.
  • Add titles to the beginning of the video.

 

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