Above is my first draft for my double page spread for my indie magazine. Overall I think it is successful as it shows the indie genre.

Comments from my teacher include:

• Add a third column and move the image over
• Add the 2 lines I have top right to bottom left
• Make the questions bigger and change the font
• Move “article continues on next page” underneath the last column
• Move the smaller picture of Will
• Get rid of dashes