A New Improved DPS

Above is my second draft for my double page spread. Changes I have made are:

  • Deleted the smaller image of Will
  • Added the two lines to the bottom left of the page
  • Added a third column
  • Added in the credits for the article and image
  • Changed the number which was bottom left
  • Added an image of a flower to “The Marigolds” to make it more interesting
  • Moved the text to the left hand side
  • Changed the font of the questions so they stand out

These changes have made a big improvement but there are still things that I can do to improve my double page spread further. These include:

  • Make the picture of Will bigger
  • Have gaps between the text and the edge of the box
  • Change the wording of “Article continues on next page”
  • Add lines between each question
  • Put something underneath the first column bottom left to fill the empty space

 

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