Above is my second draft for my double page spread. Changes I have made are:
- Deleted the smaller image of Will
- Added the two lines to the bottom left of the page
- Added a third column
- Added in the credits for the article and image
- Changed the number which was bottom left
- Added an image of a flower to “The Marigolds” to make it more interesting
- Moved the text to the left hand side
- Changed the font of the questions so they stand out
These changes have made a big improvement but there are still things that I can do to improve my double page spread further. These include:
- Make the picture of Will bigger
- Have gaps between the text and the edge of the box
- Change the wording of “Article continues on next page”
- Add lines between each question
- Put something underneath the first column bottom left to fill the empty space