A New Improved Contents Page

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Contents Page Second Draft

Above is my second draft of contents page. Improvements I have made include:

  • Added another image to fill the empty space
  • Added page references on my images
  • Added more captions to fill the empty space
  • Added social media links so that my audience can feel included

I then asked a peer in my class to give feedback on my contents page. Overall the comments were positive, which is good, however their are still things to improve on. Her comments were:

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