Teacher Feedback – screen castify

After we completed our second music video draft our teacher gave us some feedback via a screencastify, which is shown below. Her notes were on the most part positive but there are definitely things to improve upon.

Positives:

  • She thought the jump cut sequences were effective
  • Good editing to the beat
  • Likes the black and white colouring on the lip syncing shots
  • Extreme close ups of for example the eyes are effective

Improvements:

  • Likes the black and white colouring but it should be on all of the lip sync shots
  • Zoom, scale and position some of the performance shots differently
  • Quicker pace and more close ups during the crescendo coming up to the last chorus
  • “Welcome to the” needs to be narrative rather than performance
  • Make the second shot of the chains different e.g. flip or reverse it so people don’t know its the same
  • Try to lighten the clip in the wall as it is very dark

 

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