After listening to all my feedback on my first draft of my double page spread, I have created a new improved version with all the appropriate changes I needed to make. Some of the changes I made to my double page spread are:

• Increasing the saturation of the photo so it’s more bright and interesting.
• Adding shapes and borders to make the pages more attractive to the audience.
• Changing fonts and colours to fit theme of my magazine.
• Making quotes larger or bold to make them noticed by audience.
• Adding page numbers and By Line.

This is my new version:

Overall, I am reasonably pleased with my double page spread however there are still a few changes I would like to make to it.

The next changes I would like to make to my double page spread would be:

• Adding a by line to credit the photographer of the photo.
• Changing the colour of quotes to white
• Bring my model down in the picture
• Making my stand first stand out as it’s an introduction to the article but doesn’t stand out enough.