These are my complete drafts for my music magazine as they still have a few improvements that my teacher has set for me to change so I can be happy with my finished designs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is the screen castify my teacher completed for me so that I know what amendments and improvements to make to my music magazine to make it as successful as possible.

These are the improvements my teacher set:

• FRONT COVER
  • Make title more bold by adding stroke around.
  • Bring down all headlines associated with my star “Kira K” to beneath her name.
  • Write down who says quotes.
  • List the pop stars included in magazine so consumer knows they’re getting what their paid for.
  • Add gold to ‘Collectors Addition’ pug
  • Make barcode smaller and move price to the right hand side.
  • Add banner to the space at the bottom
  • Change name to Kira K as it’s more youthful and interesting
• CONTENTS
  • ‘Who really is she’- state who, add page number that the image relates to.
  • Change photo on bottom right because it’s too similar to main star image.
  • Add thick borders around the images and make sure they all include page numbers.
• DOUBLE PAGE SPREAD
  • Move image down so the title doesn’t cover the model.
  • Enlarge the page numbers towards the bottom.
  • Make the standfirst in big bold letters and put the drop capital at the start of the article.
  • Include byline for the photography image.
  • Include information/text/quotes in boxes over image.
  • Make the quotes in the article white or put them in normal size with a break.
  • A few hyphens that I need to remove.
  • Change colour of background to a green or light pink.