This is the draft 4 of my music video, where throughout the process of making this I had previously drafted 3 other edits, in which I obtained feedback on each one to reach the final edit of the video. From obtaining feedback from peers I was able to reflect on what was successful in the music video and what else I could do to improve the edit and make it more appealing to the target audience in order to create audience interaction.

The aspects of improvement :

• The lip syncing has been improved, so it is more in sync to the audio.
• The pace of edit, there is more of a consistency through the clip when editing to the beat.
• Filters- consistency of black and white filters in the narrative parts of the video- making it consistent theme wise.
• Included more punch bag montage shots with horizontal flips.
• Played with the colour from performance clips
• We used dissolve at the end to make the video have less of an abrupt ending

Summary of Feedback:

• Interesting angles, in particularly the hand held shots as it adds perspective.
• Clear narrative- the same performer defines the emotions.
• Lip syncing was perfected.
• The symbol of the ring ties the video together.
• Experiment with colour on the performance clips.

Overall, I am pleased with what my group and I have created and I believe this video has been successful where we created the ratio of 50:50 of narrative to performance. It has been successful portraying the intensity conveyed in both the narrative and audio and the unique, bold and distinct editing and pace of edit has contributed well to the sombre themes of emotional instability from heartbreak.