Here is the 4th draft of our music video, what has changed is that there are much more cuts to the beat of the music making the pace of the video faster like the music of the video. Fully Lip synced the video so there is no out of time moments. Smoke effect has been removed. Added close up shots of the main character to show the anxiety and fear of the character so the audience understand how he is feeling. Added a distorted effect to show protagonist going crazy.
Here are the comments from friend using screen castify
Get more shots of Band and Main Character to have more coverage
Less of showing the Main character walking around doing nothing