SUMMARY OF FEEDBACK :
- The shots of our female performer in the narrative were good, provided amplification to the lyrics.
- Our video didn’t visualize the pitch that we presented
- The idea of the cassette player was good.
- A few of our montages were well structured
- A few color corrections were well implemented, continue to implement more
- We need to organize another filming shoot
- The cassette player is something we need to link more clearly throughout the video and use more, otherwise don’t use it at all
- House in the background of the shot in the beginning isn’t relevant
- Re-position props/piano to get reverse shot, provides variety
- More of star’s face/close up
- Implement more of the environment consistently in our video
- Mirror shot needs be filmed in focus and other shots also.
- Bath shot has no significance and meaning behind it
- Spread out female performer shots throughout the video
- Re shoot reverse dolly from greeenhouse
- Take more shots of the piano
- Increase time on pull focus
- Show more of the green house