Feedback & Reflection on Draft 3

After completing my first draft of my double page spread, I received some feedback on how to improve the next edit:

1: The photo of the main star needs to be larger so it stands out more

2: The text needs to be wrapped two columns around the images for each bulk of passage

3: Currently, the main photo and some text will be impeded by staples so the layout needs to be rearranged

4: A headline and stand-first needs to be added at the top of the page(s)

5: A byline needs to be added at the bottom so claim who wrote the article

6: A photographers name needs to be added

7: Page numbers need to be added

8: The background makes the text hard to read and is too fussy – this is essential to be changed

 

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