Down below is our recording with out teacher for our final pitch idea along with the written pitch
6 positives
- Narrative is a good idea and goes with the song
- Mes for the narrative is sounding good
- Locations of the narrative
- Locations of the performance
- very do able and very effective
- engaging narrative
6 Goals
- Work on Mes for the band
- What shots are we going to use for the band
- Location of solo performance
- more ideas for the end of the narrative
- detail in the set of the gabling
- Make a decision on whether we are having a band or solo