October
26
Web Page Draft 1
teacher feedback:
- good composition with the word videos being under her eyes, such a grabbing image maybe add it to call to action instead as it would be more impactful?
- not a fan of the hands, random
- fan of psycho light drawing, mayne include this in the digipak
- confused by social media links and where to listen, maybe seperate
- enjoys the playlists, not a fan of the composition, sharpen layout
- dont use the psycho background again behind the video
- tickets, dont use rsvp and rickets, buying not inviting
- where in san fransico? be more specific
- merch page is effective as it’s so light, layout doesn’t fit with background, a bit clunky
- be careful with positioning and make merch page more elegant