Draft of Front Page

Music Magazine Draft 1

Peer Assessment :

Initial thoughts :

  • The genre of the music that the magazine features is pop.
  • The front star is a female pop star.

Targets for the next draft :

  • Date less specific
  • Extra insert
  • Lighter background
  • More boldness

To conclude, the feedback given I will keep in mind when adjusting and tweaking the final draft. This feedback that has been very useful, and will be taken into consideration.

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