A JPEG PDF of your three pages. Screen Castify from teacher. Summarise feedback and targets.
Here is my complete magazine draft.
Overall, I am very pleased with how my three components have worked out. My favourite is my double page spread because I think the two pages work well together. I also like how I have used the extra pictures to create a polaroid style strip. I like my front cover however I feel like the background is a bit too busy and I should make it a bit more black to tie it in with the other two pages. I think my contents page needs the most work because I am not truly satisfied with the overall layout.
Here is my feedback that my teacher gave me:
- Improve the contents page layout:- It will make it look more like a magazine and make it less confusing for the audience to read.
- Make my cover star pop more:- This will add to my front cover as she will have more of a star image and ‘look’ like a star.
- Change my tagline:- I am going to change it to “where the party goes on all month long” because then it is relevant to the monthly editions of my magazine and not just like every other nightclub.