Draft 4 Feed back And Targets

This is a screencastify that me and my teacher recorded to see what improvements I could make to my music magazine, to make my reader want to buy it even more.

The targets my teacher has given me are:

front cover:

  • Make my main cover star bigger
  • Make the title of my magazine bigger and bold
  • Add in headlines and caption and add in some more photos

Contents page:

  • Add in captions on photos
  • Add in borders on photos
  • Add some blue into my page

Double page spread:

  • Put in the name of my magazine on the top right hand side of the page as well
  • Make the main cover star in the middle of my page pop more
  • The stand first needs to be bigger
  • Put different colours on the inset borders


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