Final Targets From Teacher – paper feedback sheet

Targets:

Front Page:

  • un-stretch my main cover star.
  • make one of my plugs yellow or a different colour.
  • Add in another image in a inset.
  • Link the quote with her name.
  • add in 2 more cover lines.
  • Make the main font less girly.

Contents page:

  • Remove the issue 16.
  • pop the plug.
  • make the image of Vikki bigger.

Double page spread:

  • Add in some more yellow.
  • Add in a image into the plug.
  • Add captions on my images.

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