Music Video Draft Two Includes Narrative

 

This is our draft two including narrative.

This draft two shows a big improvement from our last draft. This is because we have included the narrative and also lip synced the music to her singing. This draft is what our music video could look like but it still needs loads of improvements:

Points that went really well:

  • Mise-en-scene
  • Lip sync
  • Editing to the beat
  • Good, aesthetic scenery

Points that need improvements:

  • More close-ups
  • Better facial reactions
  • Continuity

We will take all these things into consideration when we come to put together and film our next shots and put the video together.

Leave a Reply