Above is a Jpeg and  PDF of the first draft of my double page spread.

My Feedback…

• Like the layout yet think it is bland.
• The quote on the picture needs more detail, find a way to make it more interesting.
• Add graphic illustrations
• Add more eye catching things
• Add in more detailed or more quotes

My Targets…

• Change the layout of my article, put the introduction in bold and take it out of a column (standfirst)
• Fix line spacing in questions
• Put in the drop cap to the first letter of the article
• Overall add something more interesting in
• Add page number
• Byline
• Include who the photography is by

A Page Spread should contain…

• An article centred around a celebrity
• Images of the celebrity
• Page numbers
• Title
• Standfirst
• Byline
• Information for the reader

Generally, I like where my double page spread is heading however, there are many aspects that I can improve to make the most pf my design skills and expand on them.