My Targets…

Front cover…

• leave more bleed and slug area
• make the cover image bigger
• make the main coverline bigger
• add more yellow
• add more coverlines, make the cover more busy
• make the coverlines bigger and more eye catching
• change the plain masthead to something more interesting

Contents page…

• the font doesn’t follow the conventions of a pop magazine
• make the coverlines upper case
• add a page number
• the fade on the contents heading is too pale (could outline)
• alignment of coverlines and description
• fix staggering of numbers
• check spelling accuracy
• utilise empty space (add an editors welcome)

Double Page Spread…

• make sure there is more bleed and slug area
• check accuracy of spelling
• bring the title of the article down
• hyphenate the article and stand first
• add in a drop capital
• make column width more accurate to the layout of the DPS
• image is squashed
• cover the branding on models top
• put magazine logo somewhere on page
• try different colour schemes
• add graphic designs to make it more interesting
• add a ‘to be continued” at the end of unfinished article.