My targets from feedback…

Front cover…

• move the main mast head as the bar code is covering part of one of the letters.
• mover pug lower down

Contents…

• change the photos at the bottom to a white block with photos from the shoot
• fix the line spacing
• expand on the girl band “who are they?”
• possibly add an editorial if there is still excess space

Double Page Spread…

• move photography by to the other side
• hyphenate the article
• on the first question change the line spacing so that the graphic line isn’t as close to the font
• justification of paragraphs
• stand first bolder and bigger
• align top of columns