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I made quite a few changes to my double page spread and I am very happy with how it turned out because I think it reflects my genre perfectly and uses the rule of thirds accordingly.
I added in this light grey brick background instead of the plain purple that was recommended because I feel that it gave it more of a grungy effect and also makes the page slightly more interesting. Another thing I changed was removing one of the textboxes and I feel like it makes my page look more organised and brings attention back onto my stars face.
Overall I’m very happy with how my double page spread turned out as it reflects my genre and the artists very well and my target audience would be very attracted to my magazine so far.