Feedback on Article


Please click on the link above to Listen to Grace Kelly reading my article.

Good things:

  • Includes a lot of information in a small amount of paragraphs
  • Questions are things that the audience would want to hear and know about
  • Promoted the star’s music and other projects
  • got audience excited about future things coming up



  • Change the font on the stand first
  • Make the quote bold
  • Make the stand first and quote different to the rest of he article as it’s slightly hard to know where to read next
  • Read over as there are 1 or 2 words/sentences that don’t sound right


So overall I am fairly happy with my article, I will now change the appropriate faults in my double page spread and complete the finishing touches to perfect it.










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