We had a discussion with Mrs.Cobb to ensure that are ideas were suitable and creative enough with the song that me and Bea have chosen. This helped us come up with new ideas for the narrative of the music video for it to be more engaging with the audience

What Was Good 

• The idea of the father figure, contrasting how involved he was with his sons life at the beginning to how absent he is from his life later
• The differences in the lighting from the son’s childhood to the present which are lighter and brighter colours which will connote the bright and happy times of his childhood to a darker setting which will connote the darkness in his life now
• How plain the son’s room will be with plain walls and just a single bed
• The father figure just being kind of a manikin with a suit and tie showing he has no personality to him and barely involved in life which enhances the idea of how absent he is from his son’s life

What We Need To Change 

• I am performing in the music video therefore I need to either pull out from the performance or the narrative to enable me to do some filming of the music video
• We have to see to some child protection agreements as my little brother who is almost 4 years old will be in the music video
• We will need to think about how we will be taking certain shots of my little brother as he wont be knowing what we are doing exactly and wont be able to act
• We need to think about how we are going to present the father figure