Above is a new improved double page spread. Using the feedback I was given I was able to improve on my DPS and make it better.

What did I need to improve on?

• Add page numbers and byline.
• Move text and image across
• Make headline smaller so it fits onto one side of the page

What did I do?

To improve, I added page numbers and a byline. I also moved my text, headline and image across so when the page is folded nothing is in the fold, I had to make my headline a smaller font so it would fit into one side of the page properly. I think this has made my DPS look more professional with everything I have added and improved on.