Feedback On Article

Below is my full first draft of my article written on a document and on my DPS so you can see how it will look.

Feedback  on article from Google Classroom:

  • Call the star by his last name instead of his first name
  • Have more advertisement about the artists new album
  • Have more quotes from the artist

 

 

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

Skip to toolbar