These are my improved 3 pages of my magazine, they have been improved with the feedback I got given on my Screencastify.
Whats Changed?
Front Cover:
- I have only one inset image on my front cover now with a border around it so it looks more professional.
- I have gotten ridden of some of the text that was next to my models head and made my main cover star bigger.
- At the bottom where it includes what artists will be in the magazine, I put a slash in between so it is easier to read.
Contents Page
- I have changed the font of the title so it isn’t the same as the front cover and I have put the logo of the magazine beside it.
- I got rid of some of the articles and made the boxes all the same size so it doesn’t look odd with different shaped boxes as that doesn’t look professional.
- I have put page numbers on the inset images so the reader can easily find what page to go to find these images.
Double Page Spread
- I have changed the background colour as usually a DPS wouldn’t be printed in black because of the cost.
- I have made the text boxes the same size and only used one drop capital.
- I changed minor things such as the page number being cut off at the bottom.