Introduction

In this task, Harry and I attempted our second draft for our digipak. This time, we included our double page spread which completes the 4 pages of our product. We continued to use Indesign and Photoshop to produce these designs, and we took our self-assessment from our previous draft to continue to improve our product, with the additional ideas we had in mind.

Screencastify from our Teacher

We used this Screencastify to pick out all the other improvements that needed to be made which were picked out in precise detail by our teacher to make sure everything needed to be improved was sorted out. Getting a professional overview from our teacher was a much-needed addition especially when meeting the criteria for our digipak, since they are the ones that mark it at the end of the production.

Some improvements included…

• Get rid of any logos
• Try and use our own images
• Change typeface and colour of the text
• Colour correct main images and up the quality of them
• Go for a more dark approach, add a skull or any asset which adds to a gloomy atmosphere

These are just a few ideas we need to take into consideration…

Conclusion

I think this Draft 2 turned out much better than Harry and I expected, We have a very good understanding of the message we’re trying to convey, and we’ve reached the point where our design is pretty much finished, but we just need to add a bit more detail and a few tweaks here and there to complete it and make it ready for printing.