Introduction

In this task, Harry and I attempted to create Draft 1 of our digipak. We only focused on creating our front and back page for our draft one since these are the most important. We achieved this on Indesign and Photoshop, where we mostly tried to manipulate our back page to make it almost complete for our final draft. The front page we’ll continue with later because Harry and I thought it was the easiest to design, hence why we wanted to attempt it last.

If I was being realistic, I think this would receive a C grade or similar. This is because there aren’t enough conventional features included, and the overall design (mostly the front cover) is poor and we haven’t had enough time to focus on any proper photoshop for it yet.

What went well:

• We manipulated the back page very well
• Our shots were framed nicely and it was the main focus of attention
• Our mise-en-scene held a strong message, and golf conventions are obvious

What we need to improve on

• The typeface we used and the text sizes
• Using conventions/layout of our page designs
• Photoshop / Indesign for our front cover
• Appropriate and engaging language (We haven’t quite covered that yet)

Overall, I think this task was particularly successful, but it definitely needs some improvement in the future. As a first base, I think it’s definitely a great place to improve from… We have the right ideas but we haven’t had the proper chance to implement them yet. In our second and third drafts, we’ll definitely spend as much time as possible to improve upon this.