Draft 3

 

 Screen CASTIFY Suggestions. 

Front cover:

  • make masthead stand out and pop more
  • fill up and re arrange the special interviews  to fill space
  • change cases of all artists for continuity
  • add a bar code
  • and month/ year/ edition
  • make the pug writing fit
  • add some more color
  • add price and issue

Contents page:

  • center the exclusive interview writing
  • add some more color in the text
  • change the page numbers to the same color and change page numbers to different numbers so they are not consecutive

Double page spread:  

  • add a byline
  • make page number the same as on the contents page
  • make lines on corners more opaque
  • put more pink into the other pages

 what’s new?

added a new article on the top left of the image to fill up empty space and I have also moved the ‘LIL YATES’ line down to where she is so that the viewers know that that is linked to her.  I Added a red strip across the bottom to fill up space, it also makes the magazine look more professional and exclusive.  I then Added photos of the artist above their interviews.  and finally rotated the text inside my PUG

what’s new?

changed the models photo as to change it up from being the same image as on the front cover. I than added a PUG/ PLUG for the website at the top left to fill up some of the empty space and also to advertise the website. Then I made the advertisement for the exclusive interview abit smaller and rotated it more to make it stand out and take up less space

what’s new?

I added page numbers on both pages of the spread, added a pug next to the photo with an advertisement to a freebie on the Hellboy and yung bas website, Added in the full article and stuck to the color coordination of pink for emo rap.

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