Past students work that relates to our work:
This music video from a past student relates to our video as its main narrative is about the build-up of work shown with the printouts on the background and how things can get overwhelming.
they lip-synced any performance really well using a lot of different angles to convey the emotion that the lyrics give off.
the costume and overall Mise-en-scene was particularly good and fit with the narrative to create an overall well-rounded professional-looking music video
Here is the second draft of the music video containing the footage from the performance AND narrative shoot.
Self assessments and targets:
What went well?
- The clips we got and the MES worked well with the original performance shoot and linked the performance and narrative together
- We got a wide range of shots using close ups and POV shots in order to shot the feelings and thoughts conveyed through the narrative by using different angles to express them
- The editing to the beat went well as we were able to link the clips together allowing us to use quick jump cuts and transitions in order to time it with the song
- we used
Targets/ what we need to do better:
- get more shots to fill empty space
- get more close up of performance and lip syncing
- do more performance to broaden the ratio of performance to narrative
- edit the colors in order to give the clips some more pop and to differentiate the different clips