Here is our draft 3 of our music video:
Feedback:
Positives-
- Nice variety of locations
- Good use of different camera angles
- Editing techniques work well
- Good narrative and variety of shots
- Good editing
Improvements-
- Keep the editing techniques consistent (not too many in one area and spread them throughout video)
- What is the end goal of the video? Make sure to conclude the narrative to help audience understand
- Is the random bit of green before and after the words coming up on purpose?
- Some wobbly shots
What has changed from draft 2?
from draft 2 we have added all of the new shots from out shoot at the beach which finished off the narrative and allowed for the story to flow and make sense
we added some more filters and changed some of the colors of shots in order to add some more verity to the clips