First Draft of the Front Page

Feedback from the 1st Draft

• Don’t like the border around the edge
• Masthead – Good font, nice bold drop shadow, strike-through needs to be bolder
• Possibly change plug to ‘for the individualists’ instead
• ‘Morgana’ cover line font good, change background colour to match scheme more, shorter body text and a different font
• Pug good, nice effect
• Editing around model’s hair looks messy, don’t keep the logo on the shirt if it’s not going to have any significance
• Remove negative in main cover line, consider the design of it more
• Include issue date and price by barcode
• Bolder cover lines along the bottom of the page

My Main Targets 

My main 5 targets to improve this draft are:

• Work in Photoshop to improve the edit of my cover star
• Add all necessary information by the barcode
• Use a different, better body text
• Ensure all features match colour scheme
• Remove the border from the cover

I will take these notes and targets into consideration in order to create a more successful second draft.