This is the second draft of my front page. I edited it on InDesign and tried to include the feedback that I received from my peers and teacher.

What is New:

• I changed the fonts to make it bolder
• I added more cover lines
• I played with colour to make it more coherent
• I made the title stronger so that it would stand out more
• I made the model bigger so that she would fill the page more

My Targets:

• I need to brighten the image and make her lips brighter
• I need to include the date and price of the magazine
• I need to move the vertical cover line so that it fills the purple circle at the top
• Possibly add in more cover lines
• I need to include real EDM artist names
• I need to justify the text